Tuesday, 14 January 2014

Final Self-assessment

1st Pillar: Self Regulation
        This semester, if I'm being honest, I don't think my self regulation has improved that much. Like last semester, I have trouble finishing assignments on time, as well as stay on task in class. However, the assignment I didn't finish yet is the Romeo and Juliet essay. But, lately I've been able to complete my work at home. Granted, 50% of my work is put up later than it's supposed to be. I don't have a problem with listening and paying attention in class, as well as helping others or giving suggestions. For example, I've edited both Sarah's and Sukhleen's Final essay for our pressure unit. I helped out sorting theme statements/thesis statements. When we are working in groups, I give insight and ideas. I typically stay in task when we work in groups. However, individually I could do better, I often loose focus and check twitter or whatever on my device. Although I don't comment often, when I do I really think about it and make sure it's in a respectful manner. 
Total: 18%


2nd Pillar: Quality of Communication Skills 
             One of the expectations from the prescribed learning outcomes is to: 
  1. B8  explain and support personal responses to texts, by
    – making comparisons to other ideas and concepts
    – relating reactions and emotions to understanding of the
    text – explaining opinions using reasons and evidence
    – suggesting
    contextual influences 
An example of me displaying this is when we were doing the poetry assignment, and I think the best example of me showing this is from the discussion for How is your Heart by Charles Bukowski. I analyzed the theme, meaning and tone in all possible aspects and figured out which one made most sense to me. 
Examples:





Another expectation from the PLO's:
    1. C7  select, adapt, and apply a range of strategies to revise, edit, and publish writing and representing, including
      – checking work against established criteria
      – enhancing supporting details and examples – refining specific aspects and
      features of text – proofreading 
    Throughout the class, I always revise and edit my work after I'm finished, fixing errors or moving sentences around and occasionally change phrases. Before finishing I make sure everything is in order and good in my standards. Additionally, I proofread other's work really often, and make suggestions and explain different concepts, such as different theme statements and thesis statements. I also help figure out the different types of essays we have the choice of writing, like with our essay on pressure. 

    Finally, the last PLO is:
     
  1. 2 write purposeful information texts that express ideas and information to:
  2. – explore and respond 
  3. – record and describe
  4. – analyse and explain
  5. – speculate and consider
  6. – argue and persuade
  7. – engage
 I show this through my final essay on pressure, my synthesis essay, as well as my final response on relationships. An example from my final essay:


An example from my final response:

Total:32%

  1. 3rd Pillar: Contribution to the learning environment 
  2. When it comes to commenting, I fall flat, because I hardly comment at all however, when I do I think I do a good job, because I try to make my comments helpful/thoughtful, so I can actually help them improve their work. Additionally, I help proof read and edit other people's assignments, and give them some input on their work. During group talks, I also contribute regularly, giving new ideas. 
Total: 25%

Total percentage:75% 

1 comment:

  1. Great PLOs and a wonderful effort at honesty. I am left wondering... WHY? what is happening in your head? Do you see any pattern or feel any sense of control over your choices? In you essay you didn't really explore the complexity of Christopher's parents choices (though you did say they are complicated) ... I wonder how much of your own complexities you have reflected on? Do you have a plan to improve moving forward, to better access the really awesome things inside you? I have enjoyed getting to peek inside your head a little through our class but leave feeling like the access was only into the sitting room. Like there is still so much more you have to offer your peers, your work, yourself. Good luck in English 11... I have no doubt you will continue to be a success in school I only hope you keep working on being a success in YOU. Bye Gayle. :)

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